The bus groaned up the serpentine road, its diesel cough echoing off the granite walls that rose on one side and fell away on the other. Lena pressed her forehead against the cold window, watching the valley drop into a hazy green abyss. Her stomach tightened with each switchback, a familiar knot that had lived in her since childhood—the irrational certainty that any height, no matter how well guarded, was merely a promise waiting to break.
She had not told Maya about the fear. Her sister, the lawyer, would have listed three logical reasons why mountain holidays were impractical and one emotional reason why Lena was running away from her unfinished divorce. Maya was always right, and Lena was tired of being righted. So she had booked the homestay alone, packed a single worn suitcase, and told no one except her office assistant that she was taking a week of accrued leave to “find her colour palette again.”
The homestay was called Eagle’s Nest, which Lena thought was either poetic or ominous, depending on the hour. It perched on a ledge three thousand feet above the Pansari River, accessible only by a footpath that branched off the main road after a crumbling stone bridge. The owner, a round-shouldered man named Rajesh, met her at the trailhead with a nervous smile and a handcart for her luggage.
“You are the artist, yes?” he said, his English clipped and courteous. “We don’t get many artists. Mostly trekkers who want to drink and shout at the stars.”
Lena laughed, though she felt the altitude already thinning her breath. “I’m a graphic designer. That’s a kind of artist who takes orders.”
Rajesh led her up the winding path, pointing out wild orchids and a distant waterfall that looked like a silver thread. The homestay itself was a two-storey wooden structure, painted a faded mustard, with a corrugated tin roof and a wide deck that jutted over the precipice like a tongue tasting the air. Lena stopped at the threshold, her eyes fixed on that deck—on the low wooden railing that seemed, from this angle, to be the only barrier between the living room and the void.
“The view is best from there,” Rajesh said, noticing her gaze. “Sunset, sunrise—all the tourists take photos. Very safe. I had the whole railing reinforced last month.”
Lena nodded, but she did not step onto the deck. Instead, she asked for her room—Room 2, the one facing the hillside rather than the drop. Rajesh hesitated, then shrugged. “As you wish, madam. But Room 4 is the one with the balcony. You will miss the stars.”
“I prefer walls,” Lena said, and she meant it.
That evening, she ate a simple meal of lentil soup and flatbread in the common dining area. There were two other guests: a German couple who spoke little and a solo traveller from Mumbai who spent the entire dinner on his phone. Rajesh moved between tables, refilling water glasses, his eyes darting to the deck whenever the wind picked up. Lena noticed that he kept a thick binder under his arm—a register of some kind—and when the German couple asked about the homestay’s license, Rajesh laughed it off.
“Everything is in order, sir. We are registered with the Vellano Tourism Board. All the paperwork is just… in process.”
The German woman raised an eyebrow but said nothing. Lena, who had spent enough time with lawyers to recognise evasion, filed the moment away in a mental drawer marked “not my problem.”
She went to her room early, claiming exhaustion. But sleep would not come. The walls of Room 2 were thin, and the wind played a low, mournful note through the eaves. More than that, she could not stop thinking about the deck—about the railing that Rajesh said was reinforced, about the way his smile had tightened when she asked about it. At midnight, she rose and padded to the window. The moon was full, spilling silver over the mountains. From her angle, she could see only the edge of the deck, the wooden planks glowing like bone.
She told herself she was being absurd. She was not Maya. She did not investigate; she illustrated. But something—a restless impulse, a desire to prove her fear was irrational—pulled her out of the room and down the narrow hallway. The common area was dark, the other guests asleep. The deck door was unlatched.
Lena stepped outside. The cold air hit her like a slap, and she gripped the doorframe until her knuckles whitened. The deck stretched before her, a rectangle of weathered timber suspended over nothing. The railing was a chest-high barrier of thick wooden posts connected by horizontal slats. It looked sturdy enough. She took one step, then another, her sandals scuffing against the grain. She forced herself to walk to the edge, to place her hands on the top slat, to look down at the river far below, a ribbon of black glass in the moonlight.
Her fear did not vanish, but it softened. She was still alive. The railing held. She breathed out a laugh, shaky but genuine, and decided to take a photo—not for social media, but for herself, a trophy of courage. She fumbled for her phone in her pocket, her eyes still fixed on the valley.
That was when she felt it—a subtle shift beneath her left hand. The top slat moved, not a crack or a snap, but a silent, sickening slide outward. Her weight, slight as it was, had been resting on that section of the railing. For a frozen second, her brain refused to process the information. Then the slat separated from the post entirely, and Lena’s body tilted forward, over the new gap, into the cold and the dark and the rushing air.
She did not scream. There was no time. She simply fell, her arms flailing, her phone spinning out of her grasp, a single word forming in her mind—Maya—before the rocks rushed up to meet her.
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Rajesh heard the sound of splintering wood from his quarters on the ground floor. He had been awake, as he often was, staring at the ceiling and mentally recalculating the bribes he paid to the tourism inspector and the building contractor and the nephew of the district minister. The sound was sharp and final, like a branch breaking under a heavy animal. He knew, with a certainty that turned his blood to ice, that it came from the deck.
He ran up the stairs, his bare feet slapping against the cold stone, and burst through the common area to the open deck door. The moon showed him everything: the gap in the railing where two posts had given way, the fresh splintered wood, and, far below, a pale shape crumpled on the rocky bank of a tributary stream. He did not need to check for a pulse. The stillness was absolute.
His first instinct was to call for help. His second, more primal, was to save himself. He had no license—the application had been pending for eighteen months, stalled by a clerical “error” that he suspected was actually a demand for a larger bribe. The local police had turned a blind eye, but a death was different. A death would bring the regional authorities, the newspapers, the kind of scrutiny that could topple not just his homestay but the entire web of favours that kept him in business.
He ran back to his office, grabbed the binder of registration documents, and stuffed them into a fireproof safe that he then locked and shoved under a pile of old blankets. He returned to the deck, his mind racing through the choreography of a cover-up. He had seen enough crime dramas to know that accidents looked more believable when they had a motive. A tourist taking a reckless selfie—that was plausible. He retrieved Lena’s phone from where it had landed near the edge, a few feet from the gap. The screen was cracked but still lit, the camera app open. He took a blurry photo of the valley from the deck, then placed the phone next to the gap as if it had slipped from her hand during her fatal pose.
He waited an hour before calling the police. In that hour, he rehearsed his story: the guest was a young woman who seemed “carefree,” perhaps a little drunk (though he had served her no alcohol), and she had gone out alone to take pictures. He had heard a cry, rushed up, found the railing broken—perhaps old wood—and saw her body below. He would mention that he had “recently” warned guests about the railing’s condition, though he had done no such thing.
When the patrol car arrived, with its flickering blue lights reflecting off the mountain walls, Rajesh was already crying—genuine tears, he discovered, because fear and guilt had a way of loosening the eyes. The officers took notes, photographed the scene, and descended with ropes to retrieve Lena’s body. They pronounced her dead on arrival, cause of death consistent with a fall from height. They asked Rajesh a few perfunctory questions, and he answered them with a broken voice that sounded, even to him, like grief.
—
Three hundred kilometres away, in the humid sprawl of the capital city, Maya was jolted awake by the ringing of a phone she kept on her bedside table—the landline, not her mobile, which meant it was either a telemarketer or bad news. It was three in the morning. She fumbled for the receiver, her heart already pounding with the premonition that only sisters share.
“Is this Maya Sen?” The voice was male, official, and carefully neutral. “I am Inspector Arjun Sharma from the Vellano District Police. We have a registered number for you as the next of kin for Lena Sen.”
Maya sat up, her husband’s arm falling away from her waist. “What happened? Is she hurt?”
“I’m afraid there’s been an accident, ma’am. Your sister fell from a homestay deck earlier tonight. She did not survive. We are treating it as an accidental death pending further investigation.”
The words landed like stones in a deep well, each one sinking before the next could be heard. Maya opened her mouth, but no sound came. Her husband stirred, asked what was wrong, and she waved him away, her mind already racing through the impossible arithmetic of loss. Lena, who called every Sunday, who sent doodles of their childhood dog, who was afraid of escalators, let alone cliffs—Lena had fallen from a deck?
“I need you to send an officer to the homestay,” Maya said, her voice steadier than she felt. “Secure the scene. Do not let the owner alter anything. I will be there by tomorrow evening.”
Inspector Sharma hesitated. “Ma’am, with respect, this appears to be a clear accident. The owner cooperated fully, and the evidence supports—"
“I am a lawyer,” Maya cut him off, though she had not practised in three years. “And I am telling you, this is not an accident. My sister was terrified of heights. She would never have gone near that railing unless something—or someone—made her.”
She hung up before he could reply. Her husband, Vikram, was now fully awake, his face a mask of worry. She told him in clipped sentences, and he offered platitudes—call your mother, let me drive you, take a moment. But Maya was already out of bed, pulling clothes from the wardrobe, her fingers trembling as she buttoned her shirt.
She did not cry. Not then. Crying was a luxury she could not afford. She had spent a decade in courtrooms, watching truth bend and break, and she knew that the first hours after a death were the ones where evidence evaporated like morning mist. If Lena had been pushed, or if the railing had been tampered with, the traces would be cleaned by dawn.
As she threw her toiletry bag into a suitcase, a single image replayed in her mind—Lena as a child, clinging to Maya’s waist on a ferris wheel, her face buried in her sister’s jacket, whispering “Don’t let me fall, don’t let me fall.” That girl, that woman, would not have stood on a moonlit deck for any photograph. She would have stayed in her room, with the walls and the solid floor.
So what had drawn her out?
Maya zipped the suitcase and looked out the window at the city’s glow, the same indifferent orange that had lit her sleepless nights during the divorce and the miscarriage and the thousand small defeats of her legal career. She had walked away from justice because it was slow, corrupt, and often failed. But this time, she had no choice. The victim was not a stranger; the victim was her blood.
The question was not whether she would fight. It was whether the fight would destroy her before she could win.
Outside, the first grey light of dawn crept over the skyline, and Maya Sen started her car, her hands steady on the wheel, her heart a cold and calculating engine. She did not know that Rajesh had already washed the deck twice, that the broken slat had been burned in his kitchen stove, or that Inspector Sharma had received a quiet phone call from the minister’s office advising him to “close the file quickly.” She did not know that the real trap was not the fall, but the years of delay that would follow—each denial a fresh fracture, each dismissed appeal a splinter under her skin.
She only knew that her sister was dead, and that the world, which had always felt slightly tilted, was now upside down.
The road to Vellano twisted ahead, a ribbon of asphalt that would take her through forest and valley, past small villages and checkpoints, toward a homestay perched on a cliff. Somewhere in that journey, she would learn the truth—or what passed for truth in a country where paperwork was more permanent than lives.
But that was later. Now, there was only the drive, the hum of tyres, and the ghost of her sister’s voice, repeating a question that Maya could never answer: What were you doing at that railing, Lena? What were you looking for?
The sun rose, indifferent, and the mountains waited.
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